Do the Right Thing
by Pia
short / drama
This was my February entry at MoviePoet. The assignment was (V.O).
When I wrote this, I felt no connection to the story whatsoever. I was really surprised at people’s vote. Some called it excellent! I don’t think I see that myself, in fact I’m not even sure I wan’t to rewrite this one. Like I said, I feel no connection. Strange how everyone got such different tastes.
If you read this version, just realize that it’s a very rough first draft. Feel free to give me your thoughts on it. If and when I rewrite I will take your comments in consideration.